Conrad Rice

very interesting. I never really understood if the character was crazy or not, though that may have been intentional on your part. It's a very nice piece of work. With ...

Very good. Since this is a prologue I won't make my usual complaint of tell me more, since more is forthcoming. Jace seems real enough for a fictional character, which ...

Very interesting piece of work here. I like the way it progresses at just the right pace. The innocence of a child's imagination is captured perfectly. All in all, a ...

This is good. The internal conflict is really evident and very well done and it contributes towards this work very well. This character appears to be very real and that ...

I liked the way everything clicked together in this story. It all rolled together so very nicely. Major kudos from me. What happens next?

The children made their way back to their seats. They turned and looked out at the landscape made visible by the train’s translucent walls. They were far from the city, ...

Very good sci-fi. I like the way Svet talks to himself, reminds me of some conversations I have had with myself. It really adds to his character and makes him ...

Aww! I loved this story! You portrayed everything so simply, exactly the way that is should be with little children. I really liked your characters and felt really attached to ...

Ha ha, I can't stand that song either. All in all, this was very hilarious. I love the term ,'biased hat.' I have never heard it before, and I adore ...

I have to agree with the person above me. Just what is going on here? Give us some context so that we can understand things. It is well written, I'll ...

Terror Train Benny lay in his bed. His little eyes were not yet feeling the tiny tug of sleep. He simply lay there. He was not tired. He knew that ...

I really like how you draw the comparisons between dealing with a relationship and painting a picture. You do it with such fantastic realism and imagery, and I absolutely adore ...

Since so many people are bringing this up, I have to comment about it. The reason the butterfly has a skull on it is because I wanted to convey the ...

I have to agree with everyone else who's posted. Very passionate. I can tell you feel very strongly about this. Bravo.

A very interesting little piece, and one of the few short pieces I have seen that is good as is without any expounding. Very good.